Stravaganza:City of Stars

I noticed that the title is named city of stars but it is about a flying horse. This makes no sense, why not the city of horses. Ok so the horse can go closer to th stars. The name should have a deeper connection to it.

I realized that I don't like plot twist. They annoy me so much. one scond th pople I want together are and then the next second they aren't. I also realized that this could never happen in real life. No one can just transport themselves between two worlds.

If I were there I would be so scared that I would nearly wet myself. People would be trying to kill me for som thing I can't control. Would that ot just scare you so much. I would also be excited. It would be an adventure that could change at anytime.

I wonder what will happen next. will they die. Will they get back together. Why does this book have to be so mysterious. I wonder what the next one is about. I hope that they stay together. I wonder who is next on the list.

I'm surprised that this book is in th jr. high schools. It has death and mature scenes. There is rape and other bad things in it that is wrong. This is the most disturbing series ever.

Concrete poem

Riddle

I am attached to all objects and people
I move with said objects and people
You look in the sky you see a cloud right below it im there
The light is my enemy


I am a persons dark side
I am a mirror of black to the person
I have no reflection
I am a reflction

The sun creates me yet destroys me
My japanese name is kage
There are phrases that use me
One is a blank of a dought

Acrostic poem

Sophisticated
Eager
Autistic brother
Nice
David
McDonald

Parent letter

Sean McDonald

14665 S. Constance ct.

Olathe, Ks 66062

March 31, 2011

John David McDonald

14665 S. Constance ct.

Olathe, Ks 66062

Dear Mom and Dad:

            Are you tired of hearing my music? I have found headphones that will make both of us happy. I know that you guys get headaches from my music. I need Bose headphones because you will not hear my music and I am getting a job.

            I know what you are going to say. We don’t have enough money and I need to focus on school. However this will help me focus by listening while studying. Also I am getting a job which will allow me to either buy it or pay you back for it. That is why we need them.

            You guys hate hearing my music. It gives you headaches and hurts your ears. With these your headaches will go down and you won’t go deaf early on. The music I listen to is meant to be with giant headphones that will keep the sound in. Also I will be even more willing to help Dalton.

            I am getting a job. This will allow me to help pay for it or pay you back. I will also be able to save for college which means that it will not be a problem. I will stop being snappy even in the morning because I will have listened to good music and be getting ready for work. I will also be too tired to contradict you and will always listen to your wise teachings.

            I need Bose headphones so that I don’t have to change to make you happy. So that we can all be a functional normal family. That is why I need Bose headphones.

Sincerely,

Sean McDonald