Friday, May 20, 2011

Grade

Sean McDonald
5/20/11

            Like in the vacuum of space I have sucked into English. At first I went to the class with a weight in my chest. Then it was as if the light bulb in my head suddenly turned on. I realized that the class helped with the others. Thanks to this class an A is for me, because I produce quality work, participate in class, and I have progressed well.
            You might say I only deserve a B, maybe because I’m not neat. It could also be because I didn’t start off as well. However I have been progressing and writing better.
            I produce quality work that is better than before. My blog posts have gotten better. I think through what I am going to write before I write it. I can persuade people that I am right.
            I participate in all conversations. I raise my hand a lot! You tell me to put my hand down all of the time. I always get the last word in when we get into groups. I also study and analyze the pictures when we have to.
            I have progressed well since the beginning of the semester. I was horrible at writing until I came to this class. When I try my hardest I can actually write neatly. I can actually appreciate poems. I understand and can analyze poems as well.
            I deserve an A in this class because I have progressed well, I participate in everything, and I produce quality work. I have showed that I have improved in many ways many times.

Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Scary and happy poems

                                     Scary
When the techer gets angry it happens like a speeding bullet
When the sun is gone it is dark and foreboding like a cave
K-state is every where like mating bunnies


                                       Happy
The walls gleam brillaintly like glass in the sun
My freinds make jokes like natural comedians
The happiness radiates when the sun shines through the windows

sonnet

Gir,he wears a green fake dogsuit
He runs around like a psycho
to science a robotic coot
to him the best type of food is a taco

When playing around  he watches a squirrel
even as a robot he falls in love
always gets what he wants including the girl
He bakes biscuits in the stove

He buys a lot of food,mainly pizza
his antics are amazingly funny
even though he has bad asthma
He loves his honey bunny

His dream is to be a mongoose
also a friend named moose